Today commemorates the third cycle of these weekly comics. With this one I was trying to grasp a subject matter that is a little more serious and subtle. Hopefully the read is clear, I am not sure yet what is appropriate to leave out, and what is necessary to include. I guess that's part of the trial and error process. I'm also wondering if I am relying to heavily on the title, and whether the comic would work at all if I took it out(?)
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